Sunday, October 21, 2007

Fallen from Grace


A little girl played in a garden,
Brown legs peeping from a spotted frock.
She played games of innocence with little men,
Building castles with sand and rock.

A young woman stood at the fence,
All signs of the little girl wrapped in layers of silk.
Her eyes shone with the same innocence,
Even as he tried to capture moments in a click.

She gathered the crumpled sheets around her,
Like broken pieces of her self, they lay.
She shuddered at the reflection in the mirror,
Seeing little of her former self from an older day.

The sari looked radiant as it fell from her shoulders,
There would be a look of envy of every woman's face.
Only she knew that she had lost her precious innocence,
With the fallen sari, she too had fallen from grace!

p.s:- Inspired by the movie Laaga Chunari mein Daag

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4 Comments:

Blogger Mithr said...

Beautiful Poetry.
I loved the visualization
The innocence bit was apt
Great work


Laaga, chunari mein daag, chhupaau kaise, laaga, chunari mein daag
Chunari mein daag, chhupaau kaise,
Ghar jaau kaise
Laaga, chunari mein daag...

October 21, 2007 at 9:30 PM  
Blogger OtherHalf said...

Thanks!
I started off this blog as a review of the movie and somehow the phrase "Fallen from grace" kept coming back to me and so here it is!

October 21, 2007 at 9:35 PM  
Blogger Shirsha said...

hey even though this didn't have your classic double entendre, of which u r undoubted queen, i like this piece!

October 23, 2007 at 6:45 PM  
Blogger OtherHalf said...

I think the movie is worth watching at least once and once you have seen the movie, this might fit in even better with the picture u have in mind.
This was something singularly emotional and serious, so sorry shirsh could not resort to the usual double entendre! ;)

October 23, 2007 at 6:56 PM  

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